Among Strangers
With bundled bodies,
frozen smiles, we are always
preparing for cold.
* * *
As I take public transportation every day now, I've become a bit of a student on human behavior. At least, human behavior when humans are forced to share a limited amount of space, while waking up in the morning. Lately, it's been so cold in the mornings that the 3-4 of us at the bus stop have to move around to keep our toes and fingers warm. We may chat, in monosyllabic phrases about the weather, but we still have to keep that weird polite distance that we call Minnesota nice. The above haiku is inspired by this awkward morning ritual.
Thursday, November 8, 2007
Haiku #17 -- Among Strangers
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3 Comments:
I like this capturing....very good.
the picture goes great with the poem. i love haiku. basho rocks. write on!
Thanks for the comments, Jo & Mike.
I agree that basho does indeed rock!
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