tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post7793540101495781912..comments2023-10-20T04:24:40.601-06:00Comments on 9 to 5 Poet: How Are Sentences American?Jessicahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09701158085304753313noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-65896654508149795762007-11-20T15:05:00.000-06:002007-11-20T15:05:00.000-06:00This one is my favorite:My body wrenches, remember...This one is my favorite:<BR/>My body wrenches, remembers terrors my careful mind long swallowed.<BR/><BR/>It is almost alive in its vividness.writerwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-3965203119391771882007-11-20T14:08:00.000-06:002007-11-20T14:08:00.000-06:00My favorite: the one about not wanting to think ab...My favorite: the one about not wanting to think about all that you swallowed. It looks like it reverberated with a lot of us!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-51506326241618869612007-11-20T08:42:00.000-06:002007-11-20T08:42:00.000-06:00I just wanted to let you know that I help sponsor ...I just wanted to let you know that I help sponsor a poetry contest with a $10,000 first place prize every month. I thought your poem would be a good candidate. Just click on my name for the site. Keep on writing...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-57886887728272557702007-11-19T22:55:00.000-06:002007-11-19T22:55:00.000-06:00Great collection. I particularly like the last one...Great collection. I particularly like the last one - dreaming of secret rooms.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-60686802391623830762007-11-19T17:49:00.000-06:002007-11-19T17:49:00.000-06:00"Bus windows make us flimsy phantom reflections th..."Bus windows make us flimsy phantom reflections the night passes through."<BR/><BR/>Amazing!Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-26567658695047456262007-11-19T17:01:00.000-06:002007-11-19T17:01:00.000-06:00"I don't want to think of all that I swallowed, mo..."I don't want to think of all that I swallowed, moving through my body." ... this makes me very afraid for myself. for all of us. ewwww.<BR/><BR/>but it does make a great and interesting sentence! good thing we do such things so we have something to write about. :)Caroleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07515775952251866650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-10203465916987036232007-11-19T15:31:00.000-06:002007-11-19T15:31:00.000-06:00I really love the pipe smoke one, though all are g...I really love the pipe smoke one, though all are good.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-81460853249684920682007-11-19T15:24:00.000-06:002007-11-19T15:24:00.000-06:00Nice crisp images like a bowl of potato chips! Yu...Nice crisp images like a bowl of potato chips! Yummy!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-89919434428968547822007-11-19T14:32:00.000-06:002007-11-19T14:32:00.000-06:00I enjoyed these - it was like looking through a sm...I enjoyed these - it was like looking through a small window into your thougts :)Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-41651930749224030082007-11-19T09:01:00.000-06:002007-11-19T09:01:00.000-06:00I enjoyed reading these very much - especially I t...I enjoyed reading these very much - especially I think the last one, but the one about nail polish made me laugh, I could never remove cheap pink nail polish, I always had bits of it stuck to the edge of my nails. Now I never wear nail polish at allCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-92140083293335122342007-11-19T08:49:00.000-06:002007-11-19T08:49:00.000-06:00These are really, really good.These are really, really good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4338748757092553597.post-87953284385781437052007-11-19T08:37:00.000-06:002007-11-19T08:37:00.000-06:00I feel creepy about bus windows at night.Wonderful...I feel creepy about bus windows at night.<BR/><BR/>Wonderful lines!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com